雅思写作全真 Task 1 · 线图（Fast Food Consumption）
线图是 Task 1 最高频题型。本题为真实考试难度：三条线交叉、趋势反向、需精确比较。配考官级范文（180 词）与逐句拆解。
题目 Task
The line graph below shows the consumption of three types of fast food (pizza, hamburgers, and fish and chips) in a European country, from 1990 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
图表数据（Line Graph）
| Year | Pizza (per person/year) | Hamburgers | Fish & Chips |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1990 | 50 | 20 | 80 |
| 2000 | 60 | 40 | 60 |
| 2010 | 75 | 70 | 40 |
| 2020 | 85 | 90 | 25 |
关键趋势：
- Pizza：从 50 持续升至 85（稳步上升）
- Hamburgers：从 20 飙升至 90（增速最快，2010-2020 与 pizza 交叉并反超）
- Fish & Chips：从 80 持续下降至 25（与另外两条线反向）
- 交叉点：fish & chips 与 hamburgers 在 2000 年前后（60 vs 40→60 vs 40），hamburgers 反超 pizza 在 2010 后
考官级范文（约 185 词）
The line graph illustrates how much pizza, hamburgers and fish and chips were consumed per person in a European country over the three decades from 1990 to 2020.
Overall, the consumption of hamburgers and pizza rose significantly over the period, whereas fish and chips became far less popular. By 2020, hamburgers had overtaken both other foods as the most commonly eaten fast food.
In 1990, fish and chips was by far the most popular of the three, at 80 portions per person. Consumption then fell steadily, dropping to just 25 by 2020. By contrast, pizza consumption climbed gradually from 50 to 85, making it the second most popular food by the end of the period.
The most dramatic change was seen in hamburgers. Starting from the lowest figure, at only 20 portions in 1990, consumption more than quadrupled over the thirty years, overtaking pizza around 2015 and reaching 90 portions in 2020. By this point, hamburgers were consumed more than three times as often as fish and chips.
逐句拆解（为什么这是 7.5+）
| 范文原句 | 作用 / 亮点 |
|---|---|
| The line graph illustrates how much... | 开头改写（consumption → how much...were consumed） |
| Overall, the consumption...rose significantly..., whereas...became far less popular. | Overview：一句话概括三条线趋势 + 反向对比 |
| By 2020, hamburgers had overtaken both other foods... | Overview 末尾点出"最显著结果" |
| fish and chips was by far the most popular...at 80 portions | 起点数据 + "by far"强调 |
| fell steadily, dropping to just 25 by 2020 | 趋势 + 结果（现在分词伴随结构） |
| pizza consumption climbed gradually from 50 to 85 | 第二条线，避免重复 rise |
| The most dramatic change was seen in hamburgers. | 过渡句（高分信号词） |
| Starting from the lowest figure, at only 20... consumption more than quadrupled | 倍数表达（quadrupled = 4 倍） |
| overtaking pizza around 2015 | 交叉点（现在分词短语） |
| three times as often as fish and chips | 倍数比较收尾 |
高频词汇升级（避免重复）
| 想表达 | 别只用 | 升级为 |
|---|---|---|
| 上升 | increase | rise / climb / grow / more than quadruple |
| 下降 | decrease | fall / decline / drop |
| 大约 | about | approximately / around / roughly |
| 超过 | more than | overtake / exceed / outnumber |
| 最高 | the highest | the most popular / the largest figure |
常见失分点
- 没有 Overview：全文只罗列数据，无趋势概括 = 6 分以下
- 重复用 rise/fall：词汇单一，Lexical Resource 压分
- 没写交叉点：hamburgers 反超 pizza 是本题核心特征
- 时态错误：过去时间全部用过去时
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