雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 线图(碳排放趋势 · 范文+拆解)
线图:三个国家 1990-2020 的人均碳排放(吨/人)。
题目 Task
The line graph below shows average CO2 emissions per person in three countries from 1990 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
图表数据(tonnes/person/year)
| Year | Country A | Country B | Country C |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1990 | 18 | 8 | 3 |
| 2000 | 16 | 10 | 4 |
| 2010 | 14 | 12 | 6 |
| 2020 | 10 | 9 | 8 |
趋势速览:A 国持续下降(18→10);B 先升后降(8→12→9);C 持续上升(3→8)。
范文(约 190 词)
The line graph illustrates per capita carbon dioxide emissions in three countries over the three decades from 1990 to 2020.
Overall, Country A's emissions declined steadily, while Country C's rose consistently. Country B followed a more complex pattern, peaking around 2010 before declining.
In 1990, Country A had by far the highest emissions at 18 tonnes per person, compared with 8 tonnes in Country B and just 3 tonnes in Country C.
Over the next 30 years, Country A's emissions fell steadily to 10 tonnes by 2020. Country C, starting from the lowest base, saw a continuous rise, more than doubling to 8 tonnes. Country B increased gradually to a peak of 12 tonnes in 2010, after which it declined to 9 tonnes by 2020.
By the end of the period, the gap between the three countries had narrowed considerably. Country A still had the highest per capita emissions, but it was now closely followed by Country C, while Country B had fallen to the middle position.
逐段拆解
| 段落 | 功能 | 高分手法 |
|---|---|---|
| Intro | 改写 | "per capita CO2 emissions" |
| Overview | 总趋势 | A 降 / C 升 / B 先升后降 |
| 1990 | 起点 | "by far the highest" "just 3" |
| 2020 | 变化 | "peaking around 2010" "more than doubling" |
| 收尾 | 差距 | "narrowed considerably" |
高分词汇
- per capita(人均)
- peaked at(达到峰值)
- declined steadily / rose consistently(稳定下降/持续上升)
- gap narrowed(差距缩小)
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