雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 表格（三家门店销售对比 · 范文+拆解）
表格题：不要罗列所有数字，挑最大最小做比较。
题目 Task
The table below shows the sales performance of three coffee shops in one city in 2024.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
表格数据
| Metric | Shop A (City Centre) | Shop B (Suburb) | Shop C (University) |
|---|---|---|---|
| Daily customers | 850 | 320 | 620 |
| Average spend / customer | £4.50 | £3.20 | £3.80 |
| Monthly revenue | £114,750 | £30,720 | £70,980 |
| Staff | 12 | 5 | 8 |
| Customer satisfaction (/10) | 7.2 | 8.5 | 8.8 |
趋势速览：A 店营收最高但满意度最低；C 店满意度最高；B 店各项最低。
范文（约 195 词）
The table compares three coffee shops located in different parts of a city across five performance indicators in 2024.
Overall, Shop A in the city centre generated by far the highest revenue, but had the lowest customer satisfaction. Shop C near the university achieved the highest satisfaction rating, while Shop B in the suburb performed the weakest across almost all measures.
Shop A served the most customers daily, at 850, and recorded the highest average spend of £4.50 per person, yielding monthly revenue of nearly £115,000. However, it employed the most staff (12) and had the lowest satisfaction score at 7.2 out of 10.
Shop C attracted 620 customers per day with an average spend of £3.80, producing monthly revenue of just over £70,000. It received the highest satisfaction rating of 8.8. Shop B, by contrast, had only 320 daily customers, the lowest average spend at £3.20, and monthly revenue of around £31,000, though its satisfaction score of 8.5 was second only to Shop C.
In summary, the city centre shop prioritises volume over customer experience, while the university shop balances revenue with high satisfaction.
逐段拆解
| 段落 | 功能 | 高分手法 |
|---|---|---|
| Intro | 改写 | "compares… across five performance indicators" |
| Overview | 总览 | A 营收最高但满意度最低；B 最弱 |
| A 店 | 详细 | "by far the highest" "nearly £115,000" |
| C+B 店 | 对比 | "by contrast" "second only to" |
| Conclusion | 概括 | "prioritises volume over experience" |
高分词汇
- performance indicators（绩效指标）
- by far the highest（远高于其他）
- prioritises… over…（优先考虑…而非…）
- yielding / producing（产生）
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