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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 饼图(能源结构变化 · 范文+拆解)

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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 饼图(能源结构变化 · 范文+拆解)

饼图(Pie Chart)考的是"占比"和"对比"。本题为双饼图:一个欧洲国家 1980 vs 2020 的能源来源结构变化。


题目 Task

The pie charts below show the sources of electricity in one European country in 1980 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

图表数据

Source 1980 (%) 2020 (%)
Coal 50 15
Natural gas 20 35
Nuclear 15 30
Renewable (wind/solar) 5 15
Oil 10 5

趋势速览:煤炭从最大来源(50%)暴跌至 15%;天然气和核能大幅上升;可再生能源从 5% 升至 15%;石油下降。


范文(约 185 词)

The two pie charts illustrate how electricity was generated in a European country in 1980 and 2020, across five energy sources.

Overall, the country shifted dramatically away from coal towards cleaner sources such as natural gas, nuclear power and renewables. Coal was by far the largest source in 1980 but had become a minor one by 2020.

In 1980, coal accounted for half of all electricity, more than the other four sources combined. Natural gas contributed 20 per cent, followed by nuclear at 15 per cent, oil at 10 per cent, and renewables at a mere 5 per cent.

By 2020, natural gas had become the leading source, rising to 35 per cent. Nuclear power nearly doubled its share to 30 per cent, while renewables tripled from 5 per cent to 15 per cent. In contrast, coal's share collapsed from 50 per cent to just 15 per cent, and oil fell slightly to 5 per cent.

In conclusion, the period saw a clear diversification and decarbonisation of the country's energy mix.


逐段拆解

段落 功能 高分手法
Introduction 改写题目 "illustrate how electricity was generated" 替换 "show the sources"
Overview 总趋势 两个核心变化:coal 下降 + 清洁能源上升;"by far the largest" → "minor one"
Details 1 (1980) 旧数据 "accounted for half… more than the other four combined" 做合并概括
Details 2 (2020) 新数据+对比 "collapsed from… to…" "nearly doubled" "tripled"——用倍数表达替代重复百分比
Conclusion 点题 "diversification and decarbonisation" 两个学术名词收束

高分词汇

  • accounted for / made up / represented(占比)
  • collapsed / plummeted(暴跌)
  • tripled / doubled / halved(倍数变化)
  • by far the largest(远大于其他)
  • decarbonisation(脱碳)
  • diversification(多元化)

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