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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 2 · 全球化与本土文化(Discuss Both Views · 范文+拆解)

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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 2 · 全球化与本土文化(Discuss Both Views · 范文+拆解)

Discuss Both Views 题型:双方都讨论+自己立场。本题讨论全球化对本土文化的影响。


题目 Task

Some people think that globalisation makes local cultures disappear. Others believe it enriches them.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.


审题要点

考点 说明
题型 Discuss Both Views——两方都必须讨论
关键词 "local cultures disappear" vs "enriches them"
立场 本文立场:短期有同质化风险,但长期看文化交流是丰富而非消灭
陷阱 不要只说"全球化好"或"全球化坏",必须两方都回应

范文(约 310 词)

Globalisation has brought unprecedented cultural exchange, but it has also sparked fears that local traditions are being eroded. This essay examines both sides of the debate and argues that, while globalisation does carry real risks of cultural homogenisation, its overall effect has been to enrich local cultures rather than erase them.

On the one hand, the threat to local traditions is genuine. The worldwide spread of Hollywood films, fast-food chains and global fashion brands can overwhelm smaller cultural industries. When children in Tokyo watch the same YouTube creators as children in Toronto, local folk tales and traditional festivals risk being marginalised. In many developing countries, urbanisation and exposure to global consumer culture have led to a decline in regional languages and crafts. Critics rightly warn that a single global consumer culture, dominated by a handful of Western corporations, threatens the diversity that has long enriched human civilisation.

On the other hand, globalisation has historically been a powerful source of cultural enrichment. Japanese anime, Brazilian music, Nigerian cinema and Korean pop — all deeply rooted in local traditions — have found global audiences, invigorating both their home cultures and the world. Exposure to foreign foods, art and ideas often prompts local artists to innovate rather than retreat. Sushi, originally a regional Japanese dish, is now eaten worldwide, yet its popularity has not weakened sushi culture in Japan; if anything, it has deepened pride in it.

In my view, the real danger is not globalisation itself but unequal economic power. When global brands overwhelm local producers simply because they have more money, cultures suffer. But when exchange is mutual and balanced, both sides gain. Governments can support local culture through funding and education, while welcoming the best of what the world has to offer.


逐段拆解

段落 功能 高分手法
Introduction 改写+立场 "carries real risks… overall effect has been to enrich"
反方段 文化消失的风险 Hollywood/fast food 例子;东京/多伦多儿童看同样内容;发展中国家方言衰落
正方段 文化丰富的证据 日本动漫/巴西音乐/韩国流行;寿司全球流行反而增强日本文化自信
自己立场 关键不是全球化而是不平等 "unequal economic power" 深入一层;政府支持+开放
Conclusion 隐含在立场段中 不需要单独结论段,立场段已收束

高分词汇

  • cultural homogenisation(文化同质化)
  • erode / marginalise(侵蚀/边缘化)
  • folk tales / traditional festivals(民间故事/传统节日)
  • consumer culture(消费文化)
  • invigorate(使活跃)
  • mutual and balanced(互利平衡)
  • pride in(文化自豪感)

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