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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 线图(各年龄段咖啡消费 · 范文+拆解)

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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 线图(各年龄段咖啡消费 · 范文+拆解)

线图(Line Graph)考趋势+对比。本题为三个年龄段在咖啡馆的年均消费。


题目 Task

The line graph below shows the average amount spent per year on coffee at cafes by three age groups in one country, from 2010 to 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

图表数据

Year 18–25 26–45 46–65
2010 $120 $200 $80
2013 $150 $260 $90
2016 $180 $310 $100
2020 $220 $350 $110

趋势速览:三组全部上升;26-45 岁始终最高;年轻人增长最快($120→$220);46-65 岁增长缓慢。


范文(约 190 词)

The line graph illustrates how much money three age groups spent annually on coffee at cafes in a single country over the decade from 2010 to 2020.

Overall, spending on cafe-based coffee rose across all three age groups, although the 26-to-45 age group consistently spent the most. Young adults showed the fastest growth in their coffee spending.

In 2010, 26-to-45-year-olds spent $200 per year on cafe coffee, nearly double the $120 spent by 18-to-25-year-olds, while the 46-to-65 group spent the least at just $80.

Over the following ten years, spending by the 26-to-45 group climbed steadily to $350 by 2020. The youngest age group saw the steepest rise, more than doubling from $120 to $220. By contrast, the middle-aged group's spending grew only modestly, creeping up from $80 to $110.

By the end of the period, the gap between the highest and lowest spending groups had narrowed somewhat, although the 26-to-45 age group still spent more than three times as much as the 46-to-65 group.


逐段拆解

段落 功能 高分手法
Introduction 改写 "illustrates how much money… spent annually"
Overview 总趋势 三组全升;26-45 始终最高;年轻人增长最快
2010 起点对比 "nearly double" 做倍数比较
2020 终点对比 "steepest rise" "more than doubling" "creeping up"
收尾 差距变化 "gap… narrowed" "still spent more than three times"

高分词汇

  • consistently / throughout the period(始终)
  • steepest rise / climbed steadily / crept up(上升程度)
  • more than doubling(翻倍以上)
  • narrowed / widened(差距缩小/扩大)

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