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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 柱状图(各国网民数量 · 范文+拆解)

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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 柱状图(各国网民数量 · 范文+拆解)

柱状图:四个国家 2005 vs 2020 的网民数量(百万)。


题目 Task

The bar chart below shows the number of internet users (in millions) in four countries in 2005 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

图表数据(millions)

Country 2005 2020
China 110 990
USA 200 275
India 50 750
Brazil 40 160

趋势速览:中国网民始终最多(110→990);印度增长最猛(50→750,15 倍);美国增长最慢。


范文(约 190 词)

The bar chart compares the number of internet users in millions across four countries in 2005 and 2020.

Overall, internet usage grew dramatically in all four nations, with China having the largest user base throughout the period. India, meanwhile, experienced the most spectacular growth.

In 2005, the United States had the highest number of internet users at 200 million, followed by China with 110 million. India and Brazil had relatively few users, at 50 and 40 million respectively.

By 2020, China had become the clear leader, with nearly one billion internet users — a more than eightfold increase from 2005. India surged even more dramatically, rising fifteenfold from just 50 million to 750 million, overtaking the United States to become the second-largest market. US growth was far more modest, reaching 275 million. Brazil also quadrupled its user base to 160 million.

In conclusion, the period saw a massive global expansion of internet use, particularly in Asia, where both China and India now dwarf the US market in absolute terms.


逐段拆解

段落 功能 高分手法
Intro 改写 "compares the number… in millions"
Overview 总趋势 全增长;中国始终最大;印度最猛
2005 起点 排序;"relatively few"
2020 对比 "more than eightfold" "fifteenfold" "quadrupled";"overtaking"
Conclusion 概括 "dwarf" 一词收尾

高分词汇

  • eightfold / fifteenfold / quadrupled(倍数)
  • spectacular growth(惊人增长)
  • overtake(超越)
  • dwarf(使相形见绌)

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