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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 表格(国际留学生来源国 · 范文+拆解)

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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 表格(国际留学生来源国 · 范文+拆解)

表格(Table)题不画趋势线,考的是"数据筛选与比较"——挑最大、最小、差距,不要罗列所有数字。


题目 Task

The table below shows the number of international students at a UK university, by country of origin, in 2010 and 2020.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

表格数据

Country 2010 2020
China 420 1,250
India 280 980
Nigeria 150 620
Germany 200 180
USA 250 210
Malaysia 180 340

趋势速览:中国和印度增长最猛;尼日利亚增长 4 倍;德国和美国小幅下降;马来西亚近翻倍。


范文(约 195 词)

The table compares the number of international students from six countries studying at a UK university in 2010 and 2020.

Overall, the total number of international students rose substantially over the decade, driven almost entirely by dramatic growth from China, India and Nigeria. By contrast, student numbers from Germany and the USA declined slightly.

In 2010, China was already the largest source country with 420 students, followed by India at 280 and the USA at 250. Germany contributed 200 students, while Malaysia and Nigeria had 180 and 150 respectively.

By 2020, Chinese students had nearly tripled to 1,250, making China by far the biggest source. Indian students grew more than threefold to 980, and the number from Nigeria quadrupled from 150 to 620. Malaysia also doubled its intake to 340. Meanwhile, the USA and Germany saw modest falls, to 210 and 180 respectively.

In conclusion, the university became far more dependent on Asian and African students, while its traditional Western European and North American sources shrank.


逐段拆解

段落 功能 高分手法
Introduction 改写题目 "compares the number… by country of origin"
Overview 总趋势 一句话概括:增长来自中印尼;美德下降
Details 1 (2010) 旧数据 不全部罗列,按大小排序:largest→followed by
Details 2 (2020) 新数据+对比 "nearly tripled" "more than threefold" "quadrupled" "doubled"——倍数词替代重复数字
Conclusion 点题 "more dependent on Asian and African students" 做概括性判断

高分词汇

  • source country(来源国)
  • tripled / quadrupled / more than threefold(倍数)
  • by far the biggest(远大于)
  • intake(招生量)
  • shrank / declined slightly(下降)
  • dependent on(依赖)

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