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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 饼图(大学各院系招生 · 范文+拆解)

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雅思写作全真模拟 Task 1 · 饼图(大学各院系招生比例 · 范文+拆解)

单饼图:某大学 2024 年各院系新生占比。


题目 Task

The pie chart below shows the proportion of new students enrolled in different faculties at one university in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

图表数据

Faculty % of new students
Business 28
Engineering 22
Arts & Humanities 15
Sciences 18
Law 8
Medicine 9

趋势速览:商科最大(28%);工程第二(22%);法律最小(8%)。


范文(约 175 词)

The pie chart illustrates the distribution of new students across six faculties at a single university in 2024.

Overall, business and engineering together accounted for half of all new enrolments. Law was the smallest faculty by student numbers.

Business was the most popular faculty, attracting 28 per cent of new students — more than any other single department. Engineering ranked second at 22 per cent. Together, these two professional faculties represented exactly half of the university's intake.

The sciences enrolled 18 per cent of new students, making it the third-largest faculty. Arts and humanities followed closely behind at 15 per cent. The two smallest faculties were medicine at 9 per cent and law at just 8 per cent, together accounting for less than a fifth of all new enrolments.

In summary, the university was dominated by vocational and professional courses, with business alone drawing more students than arts, law and medicine combined.


逐段拆解

段落 功能 高分手法
Intro 改写 "distribution of new students across six faculties"
Overview 总览 商科+工程=一半;法律最小
大系 商科+工程 "more than any other" "ranked second"
小系 其他四系 "closely behind" "just 8%" "less than a fifth"
Conclusion 概括 "vocational and professional"

高分词汇

  • enrolment / intake(招生)
  • ranked second / most popular(排名)
  • vocational(职业的)
  • together accounted for(合计占)

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